Heck, if I’d been an agent receiving those queries I’d have rejected me.
So many of the things that agents tell us NOT to do, I did. Things like ‘fiction novel’ was a favourite of mine.
I bet you can't believe how such a wonderful word smith such as myself could have done that, right? LOL
Yeah, well, I’m afraid I did. And you just know how much agents love that phrase.
As time has gone on though, I’m happy to say that I’ve improved my query writing skills. It’s a process, and certainly one to be taken with great caution.
Here’s a bit of trivia though – many of the agents who have requested either a partial or a full from me…I’ve had mistakes in my query to them.
No not the obvious no-no one that I mentioned above, but things like:
- Getting my word count really wrong. Like missing out zeroes wrong
- Repeating the same words next to each other
- Missing letters of ends of words
So you see, agents are human, too, and can’t catch EVERY mistake we make.
That definitely makes me feel better